I remember seeing the first chapter of this story some time ago, so when I checked back I was really pleased and excited to see this story was finished! The beginning was kind of awkward (after all, exposition is almost always impossible to work in with any kind of grace), but you did your best and when I put myself in the position of Ed and Al I saw that it was entirely reasonable for them to demonstrate Alchemy to people from another country with such pride.
Regarding this chapter, I loved the difference in perspective on the chimeras between Syaoran and Ed. Syaoran saw terrifying creatures; Ed sees failed, poorly-done alchemy. This story is a real delight to read.
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Date: 2007-07-12 04:47 pm (UTC)Regarding this chapter, I loved the difference in perspective on the chimeras between Syaoran and Ed. Syaoran saw terrifying creatures; Ed sees failed, poorly-done alchemy. This story is a real delight to read.