I don't really mind whether people point things out to me or not at this stage (the odds are probably that I'll either wind up rewriting half of this regardless later on, or just forget to change my Word-copy in addition to the one posted ^^;), but I'll get that one fixed for now. I seem to be developing this awful blindspot for the theres lately. >.>
There's actually a pretty big spoiler hint to just why Doumeki reacted so badly to the mention of Haruka in some of my early plot notes, whether you want to go back to hunt for that or not. But I've still got a lot of details still to figure out in that regard - actually, I'm fast running out of parts of this story I have mapped out in detail, and getting towards the trickier stuff (not to mention probably several chapters worth of backstory). I'm probably going to wind up pestering people for help with brainstorming via chat again in the near future, but the trouble with doing that on this story now is that I feel like I'm cheating and spoiling people by doing it. ^^;
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Date: 2007-10-30 01:25 pm (UTC)There's actually a pretty big
spoilerhint to just why Doumeki reacted so badly to the mention of Haruka in some of my early plot notes, whether you want to go back to hunt for that or not. But I've still got a lot of details still to figure out in that regard - actually, I'm fast running out of parts of this story I have mapped out in detail, and getting towards the trickier stuff (not to mention probably several chapters worth of backstory). I'm probably going to wind up pestering people for help with brainstorming via chat again in the near future, but the trouble with doing that on this story now is that I feel like I'm cheating and spoiling people by doing it. ^^;