rallamajoop

I liked this very much. You worked the scene well into the canon and made it believable that it could happen and why. With the whole story being told from Haku's point of view, the very last paragraph seemed superfluous. I don't feel like I need to know if Sakura recognized him and that the ending of the story would have had more impact if you had just left it at the previous line.

Are the three stories in your memories all that you have written for Naruto? I'd like to read more by you and want to make sure I'm not going to miss anything.